tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-773339078108703953.post1499565169510941320..comments2024-02-28T00:36:36.312-05:00Comments on Literary R&R: {Meme} First Line FridayLiteraryRRhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11333634435256402748noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-773339078108703953.post-37504288504620713432014-11-16T10:26:53.923-05:002014-11-16T10:26:53.923-05:00Agreed. The drowning line is much better than the ...Agreed. The drowning line is much better than the first line of the other book.LiteraryRRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11333634435256402748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-773339078108703953.post-61215817549611755222014-11-14T22:09:40.522-05:002014-11-14T22:09:40.522-05:00I like the drowning line. That gives us an immedi...I like the drowning line. That gives us an immediate sense of danger. This makes me want to go back and really tweak the first lines of my stories and manuscripts to make sure they pop off the page. Janelle Filahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08743237704560984222noreply@blogger.com